All Comments on 'Dizzy Lizzy 01'

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goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
very good first effort

great concept for s story. well written. very enjoyable. i hope you write more

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
So he fucks his drunk sister?

Charming asshole isn't he? These two are a real piece of work. Nothing sexy about fucking your unconscious sister. The fallout should be interesting - NOT!

1 star

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
For a first time...

Excellent first story!! Curious to see how you choose to continue it. Look forward to reading it.

Crusader235Crusader235over 5 years ago
It's a start

750 words, It's a start, and a good one. Hot Hard & Fast, just what they both wanted. Five Stars! Now get going on your other stories because this is very good.

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