All Comments on 'Do I Wake Or Dream?'

very good story can't wait for part 2 ,kept me interested.

story we see here in the "incest" category. No originality.

Thanks for a delightful, intelligent tale. you have a wonderful way with words. great sex. Bill

Loved your story and wondering what will happen with Eve, have a feeling that I know. It is a relief reading a story where consideration for the partner is taken. Thanks for writing a story without anal. I enjoyed reading ALL the story and didn't have to scroll over most of it. I wish more writers would realize that anal is not a turn on for everyone.

You really scored in this story with the amount of Romance, caring, and character devolment. You titillated us with Eve and now you need to continue with this story line. Nice Work!

I was totally involved with the love story between the son and the mother and the degree of mutual need for each other.The suddenly they are both fucking others as if it never happened. Those feelings don't go away like that. Clearly the only good part of the story ended with the aunr.Granted I am sentimental and emotional, but I think loving someone regardless of whether or not it is family is more complicated.I think the story promised one thing that was beautiful and turned into just another fuck story.

Good story but would have been much more pleasurable with a more natural use of language. The reading approached tedium by the end of the story.

Your story has a ring of truth I once was a maintenance man in a condo with many middle aged women

Just great! Of all the stories read at literotica, this was the best.

The style of keeping audiance thinking "What would happen next?", and there by exiting their immagination is marvelleous.

Please don't give a sequal. That would spoil the end.

Would definatly like to enjoy more works, from you.

Keep writing. May God bless your pen. Amen.

I would like to have read about Eve and how he seduced her.How he made the poor girl sore with all of the cock he put to her,and how she became to love him with all of the passion she had. In time it was disclosed that her and her father also had a special relationship as Bess and Ric has. It seems that Bess just couldn't give up that cock of Ric's and kept on fucking even after she was married......Great story and very believable.Thanks ............Rich

I would have given the story 5 stars, but in the end I felt like I was left wanting. IMHO, there needs to be one more chapter. Great story though.

I've been reading stories here for years now. Entertaining for sure, but not normally memorable. This however, is most memorable. Totally well done beginning to (sadly) the end. Wonderful pace, marvelous descriptions, almost believable characters. As Billy Crystal once purred, "Mahvalus darling, simply mahvalus". I truly thank you for the time and imagination. BRAVO!!!!

Yes, very disappointing ending.

After wonderful loving moments between mother and son... nothing.

A let down. As if nothing important had happened.

Too bad..

I think you should have brought step sis into picture sooner and had relations build between them

But hey it is your story you tell it your way

Then with too many players it turned into a cheap literotica fuck fest. 2 stars...

Having sex with relattive and then loving someone else feels very cheqp to me.