All Comments on 'Do It For Charity Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good story, but..

My one gripe is the scene with Darcy should have been longer. Ms marvel should have been pt. 3. And him fucking Darcy all of part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Quality

Would really like to see more of this story. Would be good to see a non super-powered Peter Parker work his way through every heroine and villainess he can get his hands on

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
But...

Always a pleasure seeing Pete get the goods; he deserves it. My only gripe is with chapter one, making every heroine into either a lesbian or a sex hungry bisexual. Understandably it's for the story because most would rather see two chicks than a dude and a chick. Just my personal feelings on it - yuri was never a favorite of mine.

Beast1996Beast1996almost 8 years ago
Thanks for the good laugh and the good fap

Have to say, i know you are probably not trying to be funny, but the whole Easter Eggs like Carol Corps and the like really crack me up. Thx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Speechless...

Such an erotic, mind blowing love tale with Captain Marvel. She's so fucking sexy, gorgeous and HOT! I loved this so much!!!

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