All Comments on 'Do It or Lose It'

I loved the story but… I wouldn’t have been able to go through with it. If I loved Leah as much as Evan did, I would just have blurted out that I loved her, had always loved her and that I would absolutely die if I could just make love to her ONE time, but it would have to be in private. It is clear that they are more adventurous than 99% of us. Loved it!

Loved it - an interesting story leading to and incredibly erotic finish. More, please!

This is beautiful.

The earlier stranger sex served a purpose but felt odd. The couples game - wow. A work of erotic art.

Incredibly vivid!

I couldn't get into the stranger sex because, number 1, stranger sex. Mutual whores. Empty and pathetic. Like a social experiment gone wrong. Number 2, my mind is screaming, wear some condoms you disease spreading sluts. Yeah, not a great start, and that framed the whole story, so sorry, didn't enjoy it.

Fantastic, so sexy. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Magnificent.

A superb love story, and so well-written. Two very likeable characters (albeit with awful communication skills!) and a splendidly erotic climax.

Amazing, one of my most favourites.

Just.....WOW!! The absolute BEST I've ever read on this site! I generally get impatient at around page two when I know it's a long story and find myself skimming a lot. Not this one, though. I devoured every word with rapt attention. Well written, highly erotic and SO well done. Thank you!!

I had read this story a long time ago, but just returned to it. It is as spectacular the second time as the first. You are a master of the English language. Wow.

Interesting premise.

Stilted languane.

Sex is too automatic. Too mechanical.

Geve up on page 2.

Two stars.

Magnificent on so many levels. One of the best.

Sublime.

Well, SolarRAy, that was well done. Thanks for a great, well executed story.

Now that is one hell of a story.

Now that is a great story, full of descriptions so well detailed, characters, set up, everything…..

One of the best on here.

Great Story and well written. Thanks

I can only applaud you with awe and wonder. Such a beautifully written story with detailed characters and damn, what an ending 😊. This is now on my favourites list. Keep up the good work 😉

That was equal parts romantic, sweet, and hot as all fuck!

Fantastic.

Very hot, very emotional. Loved April.

Very well written!! A stimulating piece on many levels

Great fantasy, well written gem, something for everyone to enjoy!

I really enjoyed the way you weaved eroticism, voyeurism, friendship, peer pressure, and a love story together. Well done!

Loved this. Really well written

OMG this was awesome and please let there be more of Evan and Leah!! You did a fantastic job!

I seldom leave comments, but this story was so well written i had to. We read it together and then had an amazing evening.

I usually dont comment, I just read and move on, but this story is great and reminds me of my husband and I. His best friend bet him that he wouldn't have sex with me, well we did and never looked back. It's crazy how things can change so quick. Well written story. I loved it!

Certainly the finest Love story I have had the pleasure of reading in this erotic journal. It would be a better world if everyone could be lucky enough to find a soulmate with with which they could find such bliss.

Nicely told story, avoiding the usual cliché of them getting paired in the club. Nothing wrong with your use of the word 'sarcastic', either!

About it, the best story I have found on Lit yet. Loved it.

98% well written, erotic... but I’ve just read three of your stories back to back, and you misuse the word “sarcastic” every time. I’ve been a professional editor, and I’m afraid that it doesn’t mean what you think it does.

Otherwise, well done.

Author really nailed the specialness of close lifelong friends who long for each other, culminating into the stage of physical eroticism-in front other friends no less! Great story, well done!

Absolutely loved this story, such a well-written and beautifully observed story is a precious rarity here on Literotica - easily one of the easiest five stars I’ve ever given. If the ultimate aim was to leave us begging for more, then you’ve definitely achieved it! Please do give us some more from these two!

Things done on a dare are usually a lot tamer than fucking a best friend. But then, it appears it was meant to be--they were finally pushed over the edge.

Enjoyed it from beginning to end.

Wow, thanks so much, all of you -- I am really grateful for your comments! There wasn't necessarily a part 2 planned but I never say never. And yes, for sure I like to think that Samantha had her turn in due time...

Really good. Almost felt like I was in the room.

Author for good reason!!!

Thank you so much.

This may be your best story yet. Sadly, 5 is the highest score I'm allowed to give...although I'd like to know what Samantha did later. Did she get naked also? Is there a part 2?

Great story please write a follow up for them