All Comments on 'Do Not Pass Go 06 - Boss Traci'

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sbrooks103sbrooks103about 8 years ago
Re-Reading

LOL, I was just reviewing comments, and I see that I previously made a comment here, almost identical to one I just made on Ch 4!

“It's not my fault that the judge considered your past in making his decision. I'd be happy to have you be able to talk to them. It was never my idea." – Now THAT’S just utter bullshit! And just how did her attorney find out about his "past" if she didn't tell him?

“Except abandon his family” – He didn’t “abandon” them, YOU wouldn’t let him take them!

“You'll be separated and put in foster homes before that happens, I'll make sure of that.” – She can’t control that. When the children testify about how their father cares about them, and the visitation supervisor tells about the love between the father and the children, there’s no way the kids would be put in foster care rather than sent to their father.

And what happened to the recording she made with her mother's threats on it?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Please do post the next part of this story.... and please complete the story named Sophie by Castlerock

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
5* Good Story

Mom is a narcissitic sociopath who needs a long painful death.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great Story, but....

Dad's still a wimpish ass-wipe so for crying out loud....END THIS THING!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Where

So where is the next chapter?

jtwheelsjtwheelsover 4 years ago
Go kids go

Dad quit being pathetic

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Damn, you write about as well as......well, you write for shit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Don't Know Who

The kids would have been staying with after Traci called the cops on the Momster abusing Jenna but it wouldn't have been mom. At least not until she was arraigned and was able to post bail, even then it would be doubtful. Signed: BTW

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
Traci

Traci is one seriously smart kid. Her slut mother doesn't stand a chance.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow

Pity that Traci can't share her balls with her ineffectual Father! He is so sickeningly stupid and ready to swallow everything "JESS" throws at him. What a useless guy. Thank God for Traci, or that Family would be doomed.! 5*s..3cXLUA

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Outstanding!

I've had tears running down my face, this is priceless, genius, GENIUS!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Christ, she is sooooo cool.....a scary smart!

Jump forward to see her at 16!......'bout 100 moves beyond smart twenty something.

Spooky!

JackEvansJackEvansover 1 year ago

Traci is my new favorite fictional character!

Thanks for posting this, FTDS!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Traci rocks!

sbrooks103sbrooks103over 1 year ago

"You call off CPS, get them off my back, and maybe we can have Jenna stay with you for the rest of the semester." - Get CPS off her back, and MAYBE Jenna can stay with him? There should be no "maybe" about it.

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"It's not my fault that the judge considered your past in making his decision." - Only after her lawyer brought it up and portrayed it in the worst light possible.

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"You'll be separated and put in foster homes before that happens, I'll make sure of that." - She can't control that. If they remove the kids from the home, and the father will take them, of course he'll get them. The state doesn't want to pay for foster care.

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"Your father tangled with me, and see where it got him." - Ex-wives may have the edge over their husbands, not so much with older kids.

Texican1830Texican1830about 1 year ago

Traci for Congress!

oldtwitoldtwit2 months ago

Still finding the kids something to do in such narsty ways, great story

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