All Comments on 'Do You Believe Me?'

by DreamPisces

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lust_addictedlust_addictedover 13 years ago
Wow!!

Well I think I'm first...which is cool (:

This story was soo sweet!! I know what it feels like loosing a [a the time] best friend and I'm glad she was able to recover. Sexy valentines gift! Think I'm going to check out any other stories you have. Amazing job.

DreamPiscesDreamPiscesover 13 years agoAuthor
To Lust Addicted:

Thanks for the kind words! It was my first attempt at this type of writing, so I guess I'm on the right track.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 13 years ago
Grat, great, great

Beautifully told and sexy as hell!

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 13 years ago
Awesome

A very sexy story with a lot of description. I really like your style of writing. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.

VirginiawildVirginiawildabout 13 years ago

The story had excellent development. Sexy story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
romance???

group sex lesbo illness whoring...romance NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO 1*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Romantic? But so hot and so erotic

I had to give you a 5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Short?

Good story and well written but I was expecting it to go a little further. Can't imagine they wouldn't have kept playing into the night. So the ending seemed abrupt. Thanks for writing.

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Just looking to try a different type of writing...and have fun at the same time! All comments and suggestions are very much appreciated. My stories tend to be more sensual than hardcore, so if you like that kind of erotica, my stuff may be up your alley.