All Comments on 'Do You Know Where Your Mother Is?'

I think your story is very good. I can see why you had trouble writing it.I found it a little confusing but as I said also a very good story.Like to read more from you.

Jmac

I just love the way you skip across details and make it just as sexy as if they'd been in there. It's so brilliant, it's such an exhilarating read. :)

Like some of your other stories,this one is very good. Keep writing juicy sexy stories. This story could be continued. I hope you will continue & see if they all start to play together.

Marcia, I'm so glad you kept working on this story - it has come out really good. And there is room for a follow-up, so please be nice to your readers!

Lukas

This was probably unintentional, but I found their names rather amusing: Jenna and James... Jenna Jameson

Bloody sensational!!

I can't believe you are unhappy with this. It's charming! I guess it's a writer's "thing" never being satisfied - at least with their writing ;)

I am still loving your work and I am thinking about posting one of my own here. Fair is fair after all.

Talk to you later,

Kath

All that build up...and the action takes place...offstage? Damn, and I was really liking this story. The "dad and mom working it out" bit was refreshingly original for this site. But you had to cut to black. *grumbles mutinously* That said, nice work. *resumes grumbling*

I hate the way you used the chat lines it made the story boring and should be rewritten leaving out all the chat garbage

James and Jenna have only just begun so there has been no incest yet and nothing really Taboo either.

I need to read what happens next.