by moreandmore
Only thing missing was hearing from the wife and her explaining and pleading for another chance. She initially at least had been coerced so why did she start treating her husband so badly? 4 stars
Where do you get this stuff? I haven't seen that trick in LW before and I really enjoyed that. You a funny man.
Stupid cops/criminals. Everyone knows you don’t go back to the scene of the crime. Very funny. I’m still chuckling. Good story to wake up to. As always, thanks.
But it was fun to watch it approach! Fireworks were a nice touch, but I expected her to bite down when startled. That was fun. 5*****
April fools day on March the first, to bad it didn't come out on the fifth , then it could have been the Ides meet the fool.
Just gives me even more faith in our "Protect and Serve" folks, though fiction, it surely gives one pause
Kind of telegraphed the end though.
Still enjoyable.
Not sure what jjjgggffrtgft means (????)
For the female gender to simply say, I have fallen out of love with you, and all I would like is my freedom through divorce. It is nothing you have done, honey, I am just a selfish bitch and I do not want to ruin your life so I found you a beautiful new wife who thinks the sun rises and sets in your eyes. No need for any split, you take everything you want and if there is anything left, I'll be satisfied with that as my share.
Now isn't that easy to say
Right to the point in a strange scenario. I think, had you tried, there was even room for some comedy here, but that being said, it was a fun little story. Thanks for writing, Randi.
***** Five Stars. Some very creative ideas here. It maybe would've been pumped up by some non-linear storytelling, and some erotic content. You are definitely one of my favorite authors right now. Thank youI
Very good story. As Hannibal Smith on the A-Team would say, ”I love it when a plan comes together.”
Cute dodge! Maybe shoulda asked 30 minute long questions instead of 15!
Coulda stood a bit more careful editing!
A cheating spouse might start to view their trusting partner as stupid and clueless, respect them less for every cheating action they get away with. That's true. But with every broken vow/disrespect, the trusting spouse will lose ACTUAL respect in their cheating partner. And unlike the cheater's delusional thinking, society at large will generally agree that cheating is something to be looked down on.
that's why tori had nothing to say when she called up. she's exposed as an ugly creature with no redeeming qualities that a partner might find desirable.
It was a solid 4 for content, but a - 12 for the multiple uses of the non-word “burglarize.” A burglar burgles!
That is one of my pettest of peeves.
The money thing at the end was a little over the top, but overall a good story. A cuck, wimp no more!
bur·glar·ize
/ˈbərɡləˌrīz/
verb
enter (a building) illegally with intent to commit a crime, especially theft.
"our summer house has been burglarized"
...one like this before. Quite original. Thanx for the great story. 5 stars.
Loklie
@ReedRichards; you're an idiot!
burglarize
/ˈbəːɡlərʌɪz/
Learn to pronounce
verb
enter (a building) illegally with intent to commit a crime, especially theft; burgle.
"our summer house has been burglarized"
As for the story, it was different, but could have been a little more to it.
. . . too many people wholly misusing a non-word, and making a bastardized word that others recognize. But I refuse to accept such bastardization of our language.
not sure what it has to do with April fool's day though. kind of sounded like they were all fools. i do think he was the bigger fool though
You know how he feels about a Man getting justice and making a Buck from the system !
He'll call CLIT to meet for a special brain(?)storming session to plan how to poo-poo this for the readers.
Apparently Mr Richards doesn't own a dictionary and doesn't understand how to ask GOOGLE how to spell a word. THAT part was funny! The cops and the wife were just stupid. Why bother with this game? Fuck the wife for longer than 15 minutes by meeting elsewhere. Rather then "Aprils Fools" a simple yet to the point "Gotcha" might have been more appropriate. And after all that he finds a girlfriend that's a cop? Seems he would have had enough of the police force. Interesting story.
@enderlocke###
The final ‘burglary’ was on the first of April AKA April Fool’s Day!
It was a great scam ... until it wasn’t!
Thanks for a fun little story. The only complaint is the forced contrivance to fit April Fool.
if they are that lame brained the 364 should suffice. TK U MLJ LV NV
Thank you for quoting Stevie Nicks I’ve had a crush on that beauty the day she dropped Bella Donna. Great work! Happy Reading
Pretty darned funny. It's not "Another Love" or "February Sucks", but I laughed and enjoyed it. -4-
Lots of personal/professional risk plus bulk paperwork for a 15 minute quickie. Cops may be smarter than criminals; but that's not saying much.
Nonsequitour
Totally preposterous, but sneakilly hilarious so I gave it five stars anyway! At least it was a joyful read, and rather well written so, well done!
R.S.
I was once told by a policeman that to be a good detective you had to think like a criminal! Hmmm!
lol great story as usual. Why even pay attention to harsh comments that go at you man? You have over 2000 followers, you're one of the best on here.
Your stories are consistently entertaining and interesting. Please ignore the anons who haven't written one damn thing except the venom they spew at you and others who actually contribute something to Literotica.
I just finished reading a 3rd story by you. I am surprised that I didn't see them sooner. Great stuff! Keep up the good work.
Thanks for a fresh idea for a Loving Wives tale. I enjoyed the story very much.
5 stars