All Comments on 'Do You Know Why I Pulled You Over?'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
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grrgg5gggrrgg5ggabout 4 years ago
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TajfaTajfaabout 4 years ago
Nice one

Only thing missing was hearing from the wife and her explaining and pleading for another chance. She initially at least had been coerced so why did she start treating her husband so badly? 4 stars

robroy93robroy93about 4 years ago
Bad cops

I hate bad cops, but I like good stories , so this Is a winner.

26thNC26thNCabout 4 years ago
Where

Where do you get this stuff? I haven't seen that trick in LW before and I really enjoyed that. You a funny man.

johntcookseyjohntcookseyabout 4 years ago

Stupid cops/criminals. Everyone knows you don’t go back to the scene of the crime. Very funny. I’m still chuckling. Good story to wake up to. As always, thanks.

AnnaValley11AnnaValley11about 4 years ago

Great fun - well done and thank you

Bebop3Bebop3about 4 years ago

Fun story, Mr. More. Thanks for sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
This was original and i liked it

The arrest was funny

muncher354muncher354about 4 years ago
Lol

Ans everyone clapped

Just_WordsJust_Wordsabout 4 years ago
Hard not to see it coming after the second break in.

But it was fun to watch it approach! Fireworks were a nice touch, but I expected her to bite down when startled. That was fun. 5*****

dragonmann72dragonmann72about 4 years ago

April fools day on March the first, to bad it didn't come out on the fifth , then it could have been the Ides meet the fool.

mainer42mainer42about 4 years ago
stupidity reigns

Just gives me even more faith in our "Protect and Serve" folks, though fiction, it surely gives one pause

WvrjjrWvrjjrabout 4 years ago
Fun story

Kind of telegraphed the end though.

Still enjoyable.

Not sure what jjjgggffrtgft means (????)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
I think it must be impossible

For the female gender to simply say, I have fallen out of love with you, and all I would like is my freedom through divorce. It is nothing you have done, honey, I am just a selfish bitch and I do not want to ruin your life so I found you a beautiful new wife who thinks the sun rises and sets in your eyes. No need for any split, you take everything you want and if there is anything left, I'll be satisfied with that as my share.

Now isn't that easy to say

LordGeoffreyLordGeoffreyabout 4 years ago

Great story. I don't recall reading anything like it. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Fantasy story

Really, LOL . Cute gave it 4 stars

blackrandl1958blackrandl1958about 4 years ago
Pretty nice story, Mr. More

Right to the point in a strange scenario. I think, had you tried, there was even room for some comedy here, but that being said, it was a fun little story. Thanks for writing, Randi.

Schwanze1Schwanze1about 4 years ago
Great set up

OK resolution.

christmas_apechristmas_apeabout 4 years ago
SEXCELLENT IDEAS

***** Five Stars. Some very creative ideas here. It maybe would've been pumped up by some non-linear storytelling, and some erotic content. You are definitely one of my favorite authors right now. Thank youI

JSipesJSipesabout 4 years ago

Very good story. As Hannibal Smith on the A-Team would say, ”I love it when a plan comes together.”

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 4 years ago

Cute dodge! Maybe shoulda asked 30 minute long questions instead of 15!

Coulda stood a bit more careful editing!

penneydog55penneydog55about 4 years ago
Wowee!

Good Story 5 Stars ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ WOOF!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Funnily enough

A cheating spouse might start to view their trusting partner as stupid and clueless, respect them less for every cheating action they get away with. That's true. But with every broken vow/disrespect, the trusting spouse will lose ACTUAL respect in their cheating partner. And unlike the cheater's delusional thinking, society at large will generally agree that cheating is something to be looked down on.

that's why tori had nothing to say when she called up. she's exposed as an ugly creature with no redeeming qualities that a partner might find desirable.

ReedRichardsReedRichardsabout 4 years ago
I could not fairly score this story

It was a solid 4 for content, but a - 12 for the multiple uses of the non-word “burglarize.” A burglar burgles!

That is one of my pettest of peeves.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nice story

The money thing at the end was a little over the top, but overall a good story. A cuck, wimp no more!

moreandmoremoreandmoreabout 4 years agoAuthor
what can I say reed?

bur·glar·ize

/ˈbərɡləˌrīz/

verb

enter (a building) illegally with intent to commit a crime, especially theft.

"our summer house has been burglarized"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Haven't read...

...one like this before. Quite original. Thanx for the great story. 5 stars.

Loklie

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

@ReedRichards; you're an idiot!

burglarize

/ˈbəːɡlərʌɪz/

Learn to pronounce

verb

enter (a building) illegally with intent to commit a crime, especially theft; burgle.

"our summer house has been burglarized"

As for the story, it was different, but could have been a little more to it.

ReedRichardsReedRichardsabout 4 years ago
Alas! “Burglarize” has entered our vocabulary as a result of . . .

. . . too many people wholly misusing a non-word, and making a bastardized word that others recognize. But I refuse to accept such bastardization of our language.

enderlocke27enderlocke27about 4 years ago
loved it

not sure what it has to do with April fool's day though. kind of sounded like they were all fools. i do think he was the bigger fool though

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Oh Fuk , hide this from HDK

You know how he feels about a Man getting justice and making a Buck from the system !

He'll call CLIT to meet for a special brain(?)storming session to plan how to poo-poo this for the readers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Awesome

I loved it! Point blank!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
So arbitrary April Fools and a burgular?

Apparently Mr Richards doesn't own a dictionary and doesn't understand how to ask GOOGLE how to spell a word. THAT part was funny! The cops and the wife were just stupid. Why bother with this game? Fuck the wife for longer than 15 minutes by meeting elsewhere. Rather then "Aprils Fools" a simple yet to the point "Gotcha" might have been more appropriate. And after all that he finds a girlfriend that's a cop? Seems he would have had enough of the police force. Interesting story.

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 4 years ago

@enderlocke###

The final ‘burglary’ was on the first of April AKA April Fool’s Day!

It was a great scam ... until it wasn’t!

MarkT63MarkT63about 4 years ago
4 stars

Not bad. There are crooked cops and real cheating slut wives too.

WillowghbyWillowghbyabout 4 years ago
Fun

Thanks for a fun little story. The only complaint is the forced contrivance to fit April Fool.

jtwheelsjtwheelsabout 4 years ago
Laughs you have. Good story

Enjoyed

tazz317tazz317almost 4 years ago
MOST FOOLS DONT NEED TO WAIT FOR APRIL

if they are that lame brained the 364 should suffice. TK U MLJ LV NV

WargamerWargamerover 3 years ago

Another good one , scores 5/5

jimjam69jimjam69over 3 years ago

What sluts won't do to be a slut.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Lot of fun in that one and a very imaginative scenario for cheating.

Omart57Omart57almost 3 years ago

Loved it, M&M! Great story!

Cirkle7Cirkle7almost 3 years ago

Thank you for quoting Stevie Nicks I’ve had a crush on that beauty the day she dropped Bella Donna. Great work! Happy Reading

Poppi123Poppi123over 2 years ago

Pretty darned funny. It's not "Another Love" or "February Sucks", but I laughed and enjoyed it. -4-

dgfergiedgfergiealmost 2 years ago

Interesting premise and well thought out, keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Lots of personal/professional risk plus bulk paperwork for a 15 minute quickie. Cops may be smarter than criminals; but that's not saying much.

Nonsequitour

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

4 Stars on this one

DickSnugfitDickSnugfitabout 1 year ago

Totally preposterous, but sneakilly hilarious so I gave it five stars anyway! At least it was a joyful read, and rather well written so, well done!

R.S.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Nice

CimenRunarCimenRunar11 months ago

I was once told by a policeman that to be a good detective you had to think like a criminal! Hmmm!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

lol great story as usual. Why even pay attention to harsh comments that go at you man? You have over 2000 followers, you're one of the best on here.

Hiram325Hiram3259 months ago

Your stories are consistently entertaining and interesting. Please ignore the anons who haven't written one damn thing except the venom they spew at you and others who actually contribute something to Literotica.

CookiecreamyCookiecreamy5 months ago

I just finished reading a 3rd story by you. I am surprised that I didn't see them sooner. Great stuff! Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

A bit silly but also very entertaining. A very good read. BardnotBard

AnonymousAnonymous8 days ago

Thanks for a fresh idea for a Loving Wives tale. I enjoyed the story very much.

5 stars

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