All Comments on 'Doc and the Porn Star'

by SteveWallace

Sort by:

Newest First Oldest First

7 Comments

bigbob2406 almost 5 years ago

You sir, do very good stories!!

elling50 almost 5 years ago

Very good

Good character development. Nice story. Good read.

tizwicky almost 5 years ago

Great Writing by a Great Writer

I’m glad that you have started this story. I really didn’t want to wait until autumn to read your continuation of Chapter 8 of “Loosening Up”. You spin a good yarn, very entertaining. Thank you for all your work!

Soo_Delicious almost 5 years ago

Great!

Well written! Great premise and, well, I want more. :)

tkh3nkey2110 almost 5 years ago

Poignant yet cute

It is obvious that Doc misses Edie, but has many vivid memories of their time together. He likes relating them to Jasmine, and looks forward to making new memories with her. I like this story. Although sexy, the real story is in the building relationship. Really well done.

mac1729 about 2 years ago

Reading again and really enjoying it.

Anonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good story, except for the cheating

Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ

Post as:

Anonymous

SteveWallace@SteveWallace

442 Stories

3536 Followers

A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...

Live Webcams 294 Online!