All Comments on 'Doc Ch. 01'

Looking for more chapters.

Keep it comming

There was not enough there to know whether I liked it or not. Briefest of character development. This being in Novels and Novellas, if subsequent chapters are this abbreviated we will soon lose interest.

Can't wait for further chapters! :)

Good start and a realistic look at todays society. Keep up the good work

Great start. I would like you to give yourself a big pat on the back for me. This was a good story. Kudos to your editors as well.

this was a promising begining but too short by far imho, i gave it a 3 star only because of that since there wasnt enough to judge higher.

i thought to give it only 1 star; but after reading the complete series i realised it must accrue 5 star at the least.

You know: It is possible two write more than half a page per chapter ...

The laws and the press seem to care more for the criminals than the victims anymore. You sure did a great job of getting that across in your story.

Wish that you would finish it. thanks for the read.

it started off good but only 1/2 dozen lines it took me longer to write this comment then to read it. I will read the others and vote but will not comment again until the end.

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

Story is incomplete. Last chapter in 09/13, then nothing.