All Comments on 'Doc Ch. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
loved it and want more

I have been following this from the beginning and i love it. it is really well written the Clean up to the story is top notch. This story is also very interesting and it has a bit of a unique spin on it. Thank you for sharing Mechmanas

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Excellent!!

it's 4am and I'm reading your latest installment.

Do I need to say more?

I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.

AllosaurusRexAllosaurusRexalmost 14 years ago
Fantastic

One of the best, & nice to see a longer chapter, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
you done good

fantastic!! a nice long chapter with an excellent story line well researched

and presented I would like to see this in print

many thanks

DormDadDormDadalmost 14 years ago
YeeHaa! More adventures of... Please

I know that you said this was a 11 chapter series; but, would you consider extending that? I really enjoyed this series. You have done a wonderful job with the characters and the plot. The addition of the Lakota mixed with old Western life stirred with the twist of a man thrown in form the past was excellent. 5 of 5 stars!

cliffhanger20cliffhanger20over 11 years ago
A RIP IN TIME?

This is the second time I've read this story but the fantasies it provokes are amazing. Of course I would have felt better with a AK-47

jarheadcamperjarheadcamperover 8 years ago
Being as this is Literotica

I believe there are some people that may not appreciate your writing. I am not one of them. This is an excellent story. I appreciate you talent and your effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
doc ch 11

you ,are a wonderful writer. the only reason I am in literotica at all is because of stories like this and writers like woodman one and a few others that are good enough to not need sex to enhance the story.

Ed Grocott

jewelya8789jewelya8789over 1 year ago

Dude, ya lost me. You’re complaining about modern women. Blablahhblah yawn. I enjoyed the history rewriting but when you get your whine on, it takes me right out of the story.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Great story and I like the comparison between the past and present it lets the reader know the modern world was alot different.

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