All Comments on 'Doc Ch. 13'

This story gets better and better with each chapter!

Charlie Utter what an honor!! Great Story I love it!!

You have hooked me in as a steady reader. I find myself checking in first thing every morning for the next chapter. I usually only have time for short reads but Ive been hooked even though I didnt start until chapter 7 was online. Please keep it up.

Is the date August 2,1876?

thanks for work.

... [like 1 page long]; that was enough to satisfy a craving AND whet the appetite for more. Now that your chapters are *3* pages long, it's getting to be a chore to read them. Also, I think that you've succumbed to the pressure to write more and faster; it shows -- the prose feels drier [like you're in a rush to report facts], and you keep repeating the same things [issue de jour?] when your hero meets new characters.

Go back to writing 1-page chapters. Please.

If he thinks it's a chore to read three pages, perhaps he shouldn't be reading anything with pictures. Thank you for keeping this interesting.

Keep it coming. It has stayed interesting and the writing has stayed very good no matter what one person says (he needs to stick to stories with pictures). The 3 pages gives the story a better flow making it more enjoyable to read. As for the prose feeling drier, is nonsense and show the person spouting this has less knowledge of writing than my child.

You got us all hooked with daily chapters and nothing now :( Hope you are well and will continue the story!

Been following this like clockwork. Need my fix. Story is addicting, please continue soon.

Please continue soon.

Hi. Just to say I too am missing my "fix" of this great story, you have written. Please, more and soon.

I need a fix of this story please more sooooon

The quality of writing in this story is what I access these sites for. Please don't leave us hanging. Your story needs to continue.

The quality of your work has improved remarkably! Great to see :)

The details of what I am reading has drawn me in. It is also nice to see that the focus of this story is the story and of building a realistic life for the characters rather than a thin framework within which to hold an orgy. Thank you. It is refreshing.

Please keep up the good work as I am enjoying being entertained immensely.

I come to lirotica for the stories more then the sex and this is a wonderful story.