by kingkey
Mr. key you have no idea the absolute joy that grows in me as i find that you have continued to write this story. many authors start a great story and then have to drop it due to time or other constraints.I hope you continue to grace us with this story and hope for a great endind.
Mr Key this story is fantastic for awhile now i have been checking in almost everyday to see if you have uploaded any new chapters. Today I got a call from a good friend who is also reading this story and tells me you have updated so i stopped what i was doing just to read this very awesome story of yours Keep them Coming
It's at the top of the listing for the 'Doc' series as the title is missing the period, so lit misplaced it in the sequence.. Another excellent chapter, sir, and welcome back..
Keep on writing. you should put this in a book. this is something that should wake up some folk how we were hurt by Whites.
I love your story, unfortunately Im disappointed that you ended it on a cliffhanger. Please finish it up I want to read how doc gets on with fighting for the Indians rights & how he gets on dealing with his four wives and the upcoming babies
Don't leave us hanging. I just surfed in and found the series and really like them.
Keep them coming.
I hope nad pray that one day that this tale may finally be completed. It is too good of a story for it to not be told all the way to the end
Had I known that you quit on us, I'd never have read this tale, much less rated it so highly. This really sucks big time!!!
When I was a kid this was the way it was, don't be a doodlebug, finish this, please.
I hope this guy is still alive. He said he had lung cancer in one of the chapter prefaces. King key if u are still around please finnished
It's been a long time I wish you would finish this story and not leave us hanging like many others have
very exciting and well written. I enjoyed it very much
millerlarry878@yahoo.com
I have read all the chapters and voted 5* on each. I am a one finger typist and do not have the time and patience to fool around with1 & 2 page chapters. having said that, This is as good a story as I have seen. It is in the same catagory as moogplayer & woodmanone. I am adding him to my list and see if this is a one of or he can do this every time. It is wonderful.
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com
FYI: Kingkey has a copy of this story @ storiesonline.net (same author name, same title) that has updated with chapter 28 as of this date. He may update here, in which case this post will be moot but if not, then you can at least get the latest at SOL.
HMMNM, good story but are you going to finish it? Someday? Maybe?
Read chapter 28 on another site, but still not finished. Maybe this is going to be just another of those so many unfinished stories. Outstanding so far though, keep up the good work.
I enjoyed the story and the various twists that it encompassed. However, like the other commentors, having the story released one chapter at a time made it very laborious to get through. Then when I get to the end, I find the story still unfinished. As such I could not rate it very high as the story is not complete.
This has been a wonderful alternate history to find! I love the imagination of it,, sugar you've started here. As it's been a few years since the last post, please know I am grinning my face off imagining the if only, if the table was turned.
In its current form, it's a great story. With work and some fleshing out, this could be a great novel.
This story has a great story to tell. It is sad to read a good story and find out that it has no ending. FINISH THE DAMN STORY!!!!!
another story with no ending. just spent several hours getting to th.is point, left hanging. was good while it lasted.
this author seems to have a habit of doing that. I did find one more chapter, chap. 28 over at online stories that was added back in 2016 but that's it. He has several stories over there that are unfinished.
Started the habit of reading comments on the last chapter of stories. Has reduced the frustration of reading unfinished stories.