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All Comments on 'Doc Zach and the Women on the Train'

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CrazyDaveTrucker60CrazyDaveTrucker60over 5 years ago
Fucking awesome!

Well done. It could definitely use more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I see that school is still out.

Otherwise high schoolers wouldn't have time to write dreck like this. Learn to spell 'eminent,' by the way. The moment I read that in your first sentence, I knew I was reading a careless writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Poor Wriitng

Rarher lackluster and sloppy, your writing needs a lot of work. The actual story was far from believable but I don’t always come here for believable stories. I give it a solid 4/10

gardenguy314159gardenguy314159almost 5 years ago
Awesome

I can overlook grammar mistakes, no problem. Keep up the filth, it rests my sick mind.

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Best to read my stories by Date. Some of my early work is Not the best, learned as I went along. Re: 'Zach Ch: 8 Part Series' stories were re-numbered by the ADMIN. The 'Widow' is a series and 'Powers' is the other. One 3 part story, "Zach Ch. 01-03 The Widow Farmer" got m...