All Comments on 'Doctor Visit Ch. 01'

Hi! Your story is a hot one. However, I'd recommend visually proofreading the story. I found some words incorrectly spelled such as "he" instead of "her" (things spellchecker won't catch). Otherwise, I'm looking forward to the chapter at the cabin. Although the story is a little unbelievable. How about putting something into the story about why they like a middle-aged woman? That coiuld make the story more realistic.

i really enjoyed this story.very sexy,and believable,which i always think elevates a atory.

add more detail into the sex and the foreplay, it would have been a lot hotter.