by maniax
Hot damn this story brought back a lot of old memories. It was great I loved it. I only wish I could have been there and submitted to all of them. I'm sure it would have been another great bi experience for me.
I liked the concept - original. Needed work from an editor, but not overwhelmingly so. Nice job. Tnx.
I dont like, to be continued. And you damm sure didnt have to kill the dog. Boo
Your story made me feel all funny inside! Its a very sexy idea, and there are lots of juicy tidbits to gnaw on. I hope you write lots more, either continuing with this story line or delving into other kinky ideas. Thanks for a fun read!
Very original and very sexy. Nice set up too. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
but wasn't. It seems that you heard someone coming home and ended the story before you got caught writing it. The style isn't bad but the story seemed disjointed and not smooth.