All Comments on 'Doggie'

by maniax

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peter_p_painpeter_p_painover 19 years ago
Hot damn

Hot damn this story brought back a lot of old memories. It was great I loved it. I only wish I could have been there and submitted to all of them. I'm sure it would have been another great bi experience for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
nice start

great start. looking forward to more

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Interesting Concept

I liked the concept - original. Needed work from an editor, but not overwhelmingly so. Nice job. Tnx.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
terrible

I dont like, to be continued. And you damm sure didnt have to kill the dog. Boo

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
GRREEAAT

GRREEAAT story. Looking forward to more from you.

FflowFflowover 19 years ago
Woof!

Your story made me feel all funny inside! Its a very sexy idea, and there are lots of juicy tidbits to gnaw on. I hope you write lots more, either continuing with this story line or delving into other kinky ideas. Thanks for a fun read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I like it ALOT!

I really enjoyed your story. Tnx

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Liked it

I enjoyed this story very much. Thank you.

zombie22zombie22over 19 years ago
HOT!!!!

Very original and very sexy. Nice set up too. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Could have been great...

but wasn't. It seems that you heard someone coming home and ended the story before you got caught writing it. The style isn't bad but the story seemed disjointed and not smooth.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Want more!!

I loved the story, and would love to see it continue!

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