by majikle
got bored kept waiting for some thing good to happen to the poor girl instead she gets assaulted by fat ugly which was bad enough the you have her enjoy it at the end.must be a clueless person that has a rape victim beg for more
You're either (1) a truly sick bastard or (2) trying to be funny - can't decide which. If (1), get fucking help. If (2), don't quit your day job to go into comedy, because you suck at it. Either way, enjoy your 1*.
aw... i type out long comment but it got erased... ahem.. in short: i liked this. theres a very cool world setting here where the rules are very different and i think that is awesome. :)