All Comments on 'Doing the Most He Can Pt. 01'

Good. Really GOOD.

This was well thought out and a time line that first. Not like compressing two hours of love making into 15 minutes. I've seen that here.

Someone here understands the value of an editor...the second set of eyes. That adds value to the tale.

Lisa wants to be a swinger? Don't think I let that pass by. She knows about her Mom, doesn't she? Nice, artful, foreshadow. Well thought out and well placed.

Of all the hot action the best Part 1 in the title.

Ugh, tried for 5 stars and site registered two