by thornapple
You've shown your story telling skill again. Please keep going I enjoy your tails and look forward to more good times. I reread you stories many times in real enjoyment. Thank You.
You have so many fine 'books' in your library, and I may have overlooked the one to follow this wonderfully hot mystery with his 'next year's birthday.". My bride and I still share your stories while spooning in bed, thanks to today's eReaders and tablets. It's a joy challenge and a joy wondering which passages will stimulate the other into moans, twitches and wetness. You are The Treasure in our reading habits. Sweet Dolce moments
Started out as a creative ghost story with people with odd mannerisms and stilted phoney aristo language in an otherworldly manor house then devolved into a banal uptight orgy circle screw
10 pages could have been cut
Your stories have too much coffee or wine is mentioned as some incredibly special bev some drink 10-15 cups a day it is an overused device
I couldnt believe my eyes when i read that Dell + ate at an Olive Garden
Their language andannerisms changed as it became a catalog of sexual liasons until by the end they sounded just like your people in your n carolina stories
You had lost their voice
Living in Europe it is always a riot to read about how stricken American women deal with nudity. No morals but uptight about being seen naked
I usually give a 5 when i read a whole story with merit
It is a free site and a lot of hard work went into this so I thank you with my usual 5
Thank you Thornapple.
This was the first of your stories I have read. I will be spending a lot of time reading more. You had interesting characters and a fun and twisted plot.
I am looking forward to reading your old stories and anticipating new ones to come.
gary