All Comments on 'Dom Bottom Ch. 01'

I'm an alpha btm too. I like to be in control, although I expect reciprocal action. I've been told by one that, having seen me on the dance floor, he knew I'd be good in bed. Good dancers make great lovers!! While dad dancers are more than likely poor shags! Make sure this guy gets another outing and the thought of the restraint brings back some great fucks!

This alpha bottom is far from being submisse and passive. He uses the top as his fuck toy. This is the best description of a cock ride I have so far read. In fact riding a cock (or two) gives you nearly absolute control of the intercourse. More bottoms and tops should enjoy it.

Every 'close' but incorrect word (dominant, not dominate - taut, not taunt, etc.); and every change in tense, detracts from the pleasure of reading a fine story like this. Do not despair...just proofread, or get an editor to help you. I have made many of my own errors; and it is okay to learn how to do better. Still a "5"; and a new "favorite".

I apologize, I uploaded the unedited version of this story by mistake, the edited version should be up soon, but I fear there may still be some errors as I accidentally deleted the edited copy.