All Comments on 'Dom Sis Ch. 02'

Can we get more?

And it only gets better. Keep it going.

Excellent story..Loved the way you blended Halloween into the story. I was way off, but loved the story.

A number of different options

Hey, I really appreciate the feedback folks. I have developed a few ideas for a Ch. 3 but with radically different directions. Regardless, whichever direction I will get it out sooner than before. Thanks again.

I read it at work and got so hard, I couldn't walk around the office until it went down.

Both of the Parts are really well-wrriten, are you going to add more parts?.

Just a shame there wasn't more.

Rapier

But chapter two less good than chapter one.

Acton moves too fast.

Sure would have liked it if, when she was holding/jerking his cock, she took it nice and slow, teasing him with hand and dialog, but nor letting him cum. She could have asked him lots of questions -- how did he like the way her body looked?

Did he like her breasts? What did he like about them?

What about her pussy? Did he like it shaved? Had he thought about what it would feel like? Taste like? Would he like to lick it?

Did he like her ass? Would he have liked to squeeze it? Kiss it? Lick it? Fuck it?

Did he think about her when he jerked off? What did he think about? What thought made him go over the edge and cum?

What kind of porn did he watch? What kind of girls did he like the best?

Was he a virgin? How far had he gone with a girl?

And so on.

Three stars. Disappointed.