All Comments on 'Dominant Son Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Stars!!!

I almost hit the back button, glad I didn’t!!! Smoking HOT!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
YES!

LOVED IT!!

A great story & I’m looking forward to future chapters. Please don’t delay too long in getting future chapters written and out to us readers.

HragsHragsover 4 years ago
Wow, what a fucking set of dirty cum sluts!!!

Yes

reekerreekerover 4 years ago
I think you’ve got something here...

How far does it go ?

MrDonNottyMrDonNottyover 4 years ago

Amazing take your time and keep them flowingl

boaman007boaman007over 4 years ago
great start

Can't wait for more.

j15555j15555over 4 years ago
Good story, looking forward to more

I’m waiting for the next chapter, though I could do without the vomit. I saw it in another of your stories and in both cases it kind of killed the mood of the story for me. I don’t mind the gagging and a lot of saliva, but once the vomit came in, all I could think was ‘yuck’ and ‘who would want have vomit on their dick or to kiss a woman after she vomited without brushing her teeth?’

Leotardstights69Leotardstights69over 4 years ago
🌟👎

Build up to the sex was to fast 😒

damnmedamnmeover 4 years ago
More please.

Great start for D/S mother/son story. Love to see more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More

This is a great start. Let him explore their limits in next chapter(s)!

far_wanderer1984far_wanderer1984almost 4 years ago

A good first installment just need many more chapters

TSreaderTSreaderover 3 years ago
A yummy fast mover!

Very yummy and moving along at a brisk pace. It's really good, let's see where you take it... Thank you!

digger33digger33over 3 years ago
Please

You have to continue this story line fir all your readers....PLEASE, so want to see what he has instore for them

pussycrazy63pussycrazy63over 3 years ago
More Chapter's

Can't wait to hear more the story

Aussie1951Aussie1951over 3 years ago
Yeah, not bad

Next chapter please...

Jmcg13Jmcg13about 2 years ago

Honestly, that was one of the best stories I've ever read. I need to hear more so please write much more and continue on with this.

Gym52Gym529 months ago

EXCELLENT 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

The only problem with this story is that chapter two has not been published.

On a grammatical note please check out the meanings of 'lied' and 'laid' see which one fits better into your story.

Congratulations on a work beautifully written and presented, please consider adding further chapters to this story.

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