by CouplingKnight
LOVED IT!!
A great story & I’m looking forward to future chapters. Please don’t delay too long in getting future chapters written and out to us readers.
I’m waiting for the next chapter, though I could do without the vomit. I saw it in another of your stories and in both cases it kind of killed the mood of the story for me. I don’t mind the gagging and a lot of saliva, but once the vomit came in, all I could think was ‘yuck’ and ‘who would want have vomit on their dick or to kiss a woman after she vomited without brushing her teeth?’
This is a great start. Let him explore their limits in next chapter(s)!
Very yummy and moving along at a brisk pace. It's really good, let's see where you take it... Thank you!
You have to continue this story line fir all your readers....PLEASE, so want to see what he has instore for them
Honestly, that was one of the best stories I've ever read. I need to hear more so please write much more and continue on with this.
EXCELLENT 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
The only problem with this story is that chapter two has not been published.
On a grammatical note please check out the meanings of 'lied' and 'laid' see which one fits better into your story.
Congratulations on a work beautifully written and presented, please consider adding further chapters to this story.