by TwistedManc
I thought it was pretty good. I could see another chapter or two, bringing in Terry, as well as adding more humiliating events for Chriss maybe in front of some of her female friends who knows what you could do. I also could see a second story with a few mortifications where you change Chris to Sophie's older sister.
Pappasleaze!
man this first chapter was great. sure hope the author isn't going to keep us hanging by not going a couple of more chapters! there are just so many things little sis can do to her big brother. think of how far she could go by simply locking up his cock in a metal chastity cage and adding some other toy for his butt. please keep writing on this story..
VERY hot!
I always fantasized about my sisters and had a few peep holes in the wall between our rooms...
very well written and so had me hot hot hot. just lucky i wear a metal cage and not plastic, for plastic would have broke. please do write more, love to see little sis take even more control
Yes, i think it could easily progress into a part 2 ?
Don't want to be a downer, but it could do with a bit of editing. terry, becomes jerry and then back to terry, A few 'tense' and gramatical issues and the final sceen is based in 'her' bedroom but somehow ends up with huge amounts of cum on 'his' sheets ?
This is very good. Feels allmost like its real, hope there will be a followup, no matter wether terry is in or not. This is hot