All Comments on 'Dominated - The Beginning'

Well written and well put together look forward to future chapters

Wondering where Dom's vulnerability in the limo comes from. I'm enjoying your style and flow. Looking fwd to test #5! 💕 ...Mudio...

Interesting story. It has promise for future chapters. Some grammatical editing is needed. And as a side, when someone is face up they are supine, not prone, which would be face down.

Super hot! Can't wait for the next part

Thanks @Hugh58, there is a second part I'll be submitting soon.

Best in many years,,