All Comments on 'Dominion Ch. 06'

I am not sure why some high-rated stories don't get many comments. You certainly deserve more feedback. So, let me get the conversation started.

So far, this story could just as easily have gone in the Non-Erotic section as Sci-Fi, but I enjoy a good story regardless. Perhaps, there is more to come that will make it more a Literotica tale.

I like the protagonists and their abilities. I look forward to learning more about them. You are creating quite the world and cast of characters. In particular, I look forward to learning what Seranad is up to. Despite him being polite at times, he is certainly well past creepy at other times. I imagine it will be rewarding to see the gals showing him they are not quite the victims he would have them be.

I will say though, there are a lot of character and race names to try and keep track of right from the beginning. It would be nice to have a bit more to hold onto with each race in terms of some dominant feature. Alternatively, you might want to do a quick guide of who's who. (But maybe that's just me and others are following along just fine.)

Anyway, great job so far. I hope you keep it up and I look forward to reading more. It seems you must have mapped out where you want to take things with so many factions in play. You have definitely given yourself a large canvas with which to work.

The sex scenes are definitely coming. Its just going to be a while because I have a lot to set up first before I can start bringing certain couples together. There will be romance to come, good and bad and spicy and angsty and some that my readers might hate me fore haha... But if I were to rush any of it then it would go against the development of my characters and then the story wouldn't feel authentic, if that makes any sense.

at any rate, I appreciate the feedback, and I definitely have a monster to tackle with this story. It didn't start out so complicated, but as I wrote and rewrote and added and considered changes... It grew into something much bigger than I could have ever imagined and it seems to have a life of its own now haha.

Some times I consider giving up on it but then I get a message or a comment that brings me back and reminds me why I'm doing this in the first place. So thank you.

Keep up the good work.

Thank you.

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