All Comments on 'Don't Call Me Daddy'

by davepepperbury

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SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunalmost 5 years ago
Great Story

You write so well. The way you describe everything is amazing. Well done! Five Stars!!!

Reiter9Reiter9over 4 years ago
Moreeeeeee

This needs a continuation, a little bitch like that needs a collar and leash, needs to be owned...

Oooooor well, the story remembered me of a ood girlfriend of mine xd

Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
WHERE'S THE ENDING?

What eventually happened between Fred and Heather?

At the next party -- or sooner?

If nothing, why?

What happened between Heather and Stu, her guy?

Did he find out?

Did he care?

Does life between Fred and wifey keep going status quo?

Or not?

How does having sex with a woman who craves sex (unlike his wife), change his outlook/behavior going foward?

This might be a pretty great story with a fitting resolution.

Without....well, unfinished stories do not rate well with me.

So I'll hold off on rating it.

Paul in Oklahoma

Cal59Cal59almost 2 years ago

Thanks, not every story needs to be tied in a neat bow

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