All Comments on 'Don't Fuck with the Chair'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
please do a sequal! !

really liked this story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
great job

Great job Loved the sTory and the writing. Get tired of reading some of the crap like I pounded her ass till I blew my load all over her face, ovor and over

Keep up the great work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
good job

liked the story, work on your writing/editing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

A dick isn't called a taint......

lord_jefelord_jefeabout 11 years agoAuthor
Taint

A "taint" is the piece of skin between your balls & ass (taint your balls taint your ass. I )never referred to a dick as a taint. If you don't know what it is, then check urbandictionary.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
good effort

Except the grammar, full stops when there should be commas and is not &

You seemed to lose you momentum on the way down !!

Keep writing - it sometimes gets better !

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Update: Not much progress here, as life has gotten in the way. Several ideas have been popping up, so I may have to change some stuff around to accomplish this. I assure everyone who is actually bothering to read this I haven't forgotten! ____________________________________...

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