by lord_jefe
Great job Loved the sTory and the writing. Get tired of reading some of the crap like I pounded her ass till I blew my load all over her face, ovor and over
Keep up the great work
A "taint" is the piece of skin between your balls & ass (taint your balls taint your ass. I )never referred to a dick as a taint. If you don't know what it is, then check urbandictionary.
Except the grammar, full stops when there should be commas and is not &
You seemed to lose you momentum on the way down !!
Keep writing - it sometimes gets better !