by lbenton
Except -
Paragraph 3 says her husband abandoned not long after Earls birth.
Paragraphs 5&6 say a year after her husband left she found her own son walking out of her boss's house.
Soup for a main course in a posh restaurant?
And I don't get the bit about the arrangements with the hooker.
It's all a bit confused, I'm afraid.
Although there were a couple of mistakes, I thought the overall story was very good.
But a fun read and entertaining. 5 stars for the goofy idea. LOL!
Loved this story but you should have continued with more! Gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!