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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 3 years ago
Great story

Except -

Paragraph 3 says her husband abandoned not long after Earls birth.

Paragraphs 5&6 say a year after her husband left she found her own son walking out of her boss's house.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Soup?

Soup for a main course in a posh restaurant?

And I don't get the bit about the arrangements with the hooker.

It's all a bit confused, I'm afraid.

linnearlinnearover 3 years ago
Good Story

Although there were a couple of mistakes, I thought the overall story was very good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Silly Story

But a fun read and entertaining. 5 stars for the goofy idea. LOL!

grayge37grayge37over 3 years ago

2nd entry was not any better

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Always super erotic to have a son satisfy his mother's needs

01Timber6701Timber67almost 2 years ago

Second story was the same as the first

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved this story but you should have continued with more! Gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Liked it but it was to damn short gave it a 4.

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I am a 60 year old man that has been forcibly retired due to a stroke. to keep myself sane, I have been writing erotica and other short stories.

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