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bogg99bogg99over 3 years ago

Well written beautiful, erotic story. Enjoyed it immensely. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
My 2 cents

I see you have written some stories. On this one, I felt like it was a narrative. I didn't get to see any passion or feelings. It was as if you walked through this story just to get to the end. This is a big step in their relationship, but I wasn't feeling it. That is my 2 cents. Thanks for your time and imagination.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 3 years ago
So erotic

So many sons want to live with mom, so few are enticed.

chytownchytownover 2 years ago

****HOT story slow start up but oh what a finish. Good read. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awesome story how a frustrated mother and son came together sexually but you should have continued with more, gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved the story. Should have lasted a bit longer

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Not good. Nothing creative, same old thing. And what is with the garbage about letting her ex 'live his own truth" ? That's just woke, relativistic stupidity. No woman or wife worth anything would be that ambivalent about has scumbag who turns away from my marriage for that trash.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Not much to it with only one sexual act it was too damn short gave it a 3

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I am a 60 year old man that has been forcibly retired due to a stroke. to keep myself sane, I have been writing erotica and other short stories.

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