by lbenton
I see you have written some stories. On this one, I felt like it was a narrative. I didn't get to see any passion or feelings. It was as if you walked through this story just to get to the end. This is a big step in their relationship, but I wasn't feeling it. That is my 2 cents. Thanks for your time and imagination.
****HOT story slow start up but oh what a finish. Good read. Thanks for sharing.
Awesome story how a frustrated mother and son came together sexually but you should have continued with more, gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Not good. Nothing creative, same old thing. And what is with the garbage about letting her ex 'live his own truth" ? That's just woke, relativistic stupidity. No woman or wife worth anything would be that ambivalent about has scumbag who turns away from my marriage for that trash.