All Comments on 'Don't Look Back Ch. 14'

This is probably the most aggravating story to try to follow on the entire site. Dribbling out these excessively short "chapters" every couple of weeks is nothing short of insulting to readers. You really need to be combining 3 or 4 of these together at a time.

These chapters are flash fiction from my blog, and are limited to a maximum of 1000 words. Therefore they are what they are. I am gathering the individual pieces into more regular chapters, which I will post in their entirety after the flash fiction is done, with a cover, as a free read.

Now that this is long-ago written and posted I have to say it’s addictive, the short chapters. Great great story!