All Comments on 'Don't Look Like a Seal Pt. 05'

Interesting twist looking forward to the next chapter

I’ve really been enjoying this series. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next installment then more of New Girl.

Really enjoying the story! Nice work.

Mayyyyyyybe Ken was being the tiniest bit of a cad but what Michelle did was reprehensible to treat him that way. Even in an emotional state she should have made some attempt to say “it’s just no viable right now” “I’d like to remain friends”, whatever but she literally ghosted Ken and he did nothing to deserve that. He saved hers and Karly’s lives the day before. Now it’s obvious that we’re about to go down the “the heart wants what the heart wants” love ache path here and Ken is going to forgive her later because well, it’s excusable because what the hell ever excuse he’ll find and that ok except highly predictable. Michelle owes several people an apology in this case. Ken most of all but everyone that was a friend and accepting of her among Ken’s friends, also. She essentially just set Ken on fire for no reason and then crashed him into the side of a mountain with zero reason. He isn’t responsible for what’s happened to her in the past. I guess I’m saying this in the hopes that you don’t cliché this thing and let her off the hook with what amounts to an “aw shucks, it’s woman’s prerogative” moment because that would be seriously disappointing. Just an opinion

Irreverent1, As this is a prequel to the Rescue, you already should know that Grayson forgives Michelle for suddenly vanishing on him. He is somewhat carrying a torch for her. I know that I have joined AuroraIncident in agonising about some of the plot dynamics, but that kiss and vanish by Michelle was never one of them as it also featured a mention in 'The Rescue' and was elaborated on more in this chapter.

The next episode may be a few weeks in coming as we have some action scenes to get right. I know some of what is AI's mind, but have yet to see how he shaped it.

'Shark' in Russian is 'акула'; in roman characters, 'akula', pronounced a-koo-la.

Great story. Looking for the next part soon, I hope

This story has also being really amazing.. I liked how the plot has developed.

Would like to give you one small feedback.

The plot where Michelle runs away from Kenny after the kiss is very similar to what happened between Jess n Jake... Like even the sentences are the same.. if you could have changed that a little bit I would have enjoyed it more..other than that it's great writing.

Please don't take too long to write the next chapter.

I love the plot development in this chapter. My heart breaks for both Michelle and Ken though. I’m just hoping that her trip to Australia isn’t a setup, although I’m feeling suspicious. All told this is a great story worthy of publishing.

Your stories are fantastic. Well written and fun reads that always keep you coming back for more.. Keep up the awesome work and I look forward to the next instalment.

liked this one and hoping for the next to be published soon

It has been over a month when will we get the finale q

This chapter was better and edited better. Much less fluff. Finally got to five*.

Great writing, really enjoying your writing. The dialogue is brilliant and I've found myself grinning at loads of it.

Great story! I have given all of them 5*.

One little nit to pick: the word for shark in Russian is 'акула' which looks kinda like 'akyna' as you wrote, but is properly transliterated into English as 'akula' pronounced ak-OO-la. FWIW.

still a good story, on with the show.............................

Wish I had know of this prequel before I read the sequel... oh well. Need more chapters... an epilogue?!