All Comments on 'Don't Move...'

Oh wow wow wow, as if someone had delved into my very imagination this lazy afternoon in bed *sigh*.

Great story best first person narrative I have read in a while

Hoping there'll be more... loving the relationship between the two...

It took me a few attempts to read this, because I had to stop after coming a few times.

The ice cube part had me soaking! I can't stop reading it

Please please please continue this!

Thanks for the recommendation and sharing your story.

Hot, playful and compelling. It had my full attention and appetite aroused. I'm keen to know how the author will serve up the ending. There are so many delicious ways it could go ;)

like a few others it too me time to read the entire story... I felt everything starting with the ice cubes......... so many dreams are within your writing , I want more god so much more.