All Comments on 'Don't Move!'

What's next keep going. Get an editor as well few errors but still a profit read would have helped. You have the starts now build on it

Great tale, please keep the relationship growing.

Have him ensure she misses her period. This time then have her full with pride that she cant wait to be knocked up again.

except for the single "off of", pretty good.

Good story. Almost the same way I had sex with my wife the first time, except we were in the backseat of an old Ford sedan at a drive in theater. She wouldn't let me put my penis in all the way, maybe about an inch, and I pulled out and shot my stuff between her legs. It was a first for both of us and she was surprised at how much and how hot and sticky my semen was. Fortunately she didn't get pregnant then, but this did lead to me taking her virginity several months later. By the way, we were both 18 and seniors in high school.