All Comments on 'Don't Resist The Twisted Tryst'

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Nice twist at the end :) A few typo's would be worth correcting, but 5* nonetheless.

I sure hope there is a next part to this tale, really enjoyed this!

Very sexy and hot

A great story that had a lot of my kinks it but never found the one to share them.

Thanks for posting. 5*****

Thank you for the comments. I had fun writing this, and I’m glad you enjoyed. And proofreading is hard work! I made a couple final edits with my phone, bad idea! But trust me, I’m sure there were little mistakes before that too. Thanks again!

Really nice dialogue in the restaurant and great sex, though I'd have liked more of the ass play given the buildup about it - and maybe a bit more buildup before they admitted their secrets to each other - but let's face it, if the criticism is 'I wanted more', that's really a compliment!

Lovely believable characters. I'd have preferred it without the final twist (which suddenly jarred me out of the fun realism) but I bet other people really liked it.

Very sexy and original with just the right amount of twisted! 5*

That hit all of my own kinky little fantasies! Chapter 2…?

Loved the waitress character! Also again - you take us into kink in such a delightful way, and with no holes barred. I love it!

Rilliant, you pretty well had me hanging on every word!! And nice ending too… ☺️

I suspected the mother would become involved. I thought the waitress was there to spur on the sex that came later. I hoped the mother would facesit him for the asslicking he likes to do. Maybe in another story…

Decent premise.

But nire interesting sexually when they were just talking about sex than when they were involved in sex.

Too automatic.

Not nearly enough exploring/teasing/playing.

Three stars.

This too. Everything you write is just bland and boring. You need to get a lot better.