All Comments on 'Don't Say It Ch. 01: A Rough Start'

Nothing like leaving us hanging.....waiting on the next chapter

That was quite hot, no "quite" is a stupid word, it's was very hot. It was realistic and delicious, I didn't want to stop reading. I do hope that there will be more to this story soon.

and I just read that, hot, hot, hot, if you have already written more chapters please post them.

Just wow.

So Maya is perfectly willing to destroy Mark's life, probably Justin's, and certainly Jessie's? If Jessie doesn't smash Maya in the mouth and ban her from her life forever, Mark will blow his own head off, not that Maya will care and by this time Jessie won't. Maya has no redeeming qualities whatsoever.

Such an awesome story. One of the best I've read.

Loved it! Can't wait to read how their story plays out. I know it's not the ideal situation to be but hey, sometimes life deals us these cards. Besides, your title says it all. Bravo!

Love the conflict, the textured layers of love, lust, and betrayal. And the sex was hot as hell. Excellent work. Much better than the usual fuck and suck.

More chapters please

She thrusted (thrust) her fingers in and grinded (ground)

Most authors on this site need to learn grammar or have their stories proofread

More please... ;)

Great job loved it. Thank you for sharing and taking the time to write the story please don't leave us hanging with just one chapter. Tell us what would motivate you to send in more.

Is this the end😭

This is so hot

I've Got to Say It, this is some warp 10 *fcking and emotional bashing. Games people play, "never meaning what they say - never saying what they mean.

Despite the heavy sexual tension, the storyline is tantalizingly good and well written. We can see the inevitability a mile away cause if you play with fire, you're gonna get burned. So please, let this story singe meh

So well written, i love the tension and the powerplay, as it says ch1, i can’t wait to see what happens next!

Nothing but hollow characters who never come alive.

I’ve never wanted a continuation to a story more than I want this one. It gave me all the feels and as someone who loves high tension, it had my heart beating all kinds of ways. Thank you for sharing! Really keeping my fingers crossed for more even 7 years later haha