All Comments on 'Don't Stop'

As a near hopeless romantic, really like this piece — flows nicely, easily to visualize and feels quit real. Gives the reader a glimpse of believable characters that you could run with or leave alone. Do hope you share more.

This was totally hot — and I loved the dialog. You’ve certainly got the writing part down.

Now that you’ve tested the water here, I hope you come back with longer pieces.

WHY THE DRUGS?.A good story doesn't need drug references.I stopped reading after the first mention of a joint.Sorry

Nice story! I liked the build up and the friendship. Good description of sex too. I hope you write more!

I loved this! I hope you write more. One of the best sapphic rendezvous I’ve read in a long while