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justincbenedictover 6 years agogood writing and...
you have the most imaginative pen name I've ever seen.
Anonymousover 6 years agoProof read
It was a good story but the grammar inconsistencies and the interchanging of the sex of the characters made it difficult to truly enjoy.
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