All Comments on 'Don't tell Victoria'

Unfinished.

For claiming to be a school teacher, your grammar is pretty flawed, as well as your punctuation. Not badly written, a shame you left it where you did...

Nice flow to it too... leave the reader hoping for more... without delivering... kinda shallow I would say, but it is to the writer.

I so love stories about married women or married men screwing This was a great story. It actually made me wet my panties with my juices! I just wish there was a little more action at the end. Incest excites me so.

Beth

Pretty poor grammar and spelling for a story narrated by a school teacher.

Little Sis is a Devious li'l B!tch cant wait to see where things go. and Do they get caught or does Sister's have a Plan to keep him Happy and Home.

nice and slow savoring each touch ,waiting for Chapter 2

Really like the story and want to find out what happens next!