All Comments on 'Don't Think, Just Feel'

by steelfistvelvetglove

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Delicious

Your writing is outstanding. The repetition of the title to create emphasis, the ascension of tension replicating foreplay, and the desired climax both literally and figuratively are very well done.

DutchAlexDutchAlexabout 4 years ago
Love this!

Great Story...I'd love to see more

DutchAlex

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Looking to expand my writing skills, one sexy little ditty at a time. Constructive feedback is always welcome!