All Comments on 'Door Prize'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A bit weird.

Marilyn had no fall-out at work? That sort of thing probably got her fired.

SkubabillSkubabillover 3 years ago

Not my favorite category, but an entertaining five star story

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Looking forward to part 2.

Bedroomeyes81Bedroomeyes81over 3 years ago

Nice hopefully there will be more to this story. And I'm sure he will be getting calls from the ladies from the club

Omart57Omart57over 3 years ago
Nice story!

Very hot and exciting!

RodimusMikeRodimusMikeover 3 years ago
Unbelievable.

So Marilyn set-up her brother John to be the one to fuck one of the ladies at a bachelorette party door prize,but Marilyn fucked up and only got her name out of the bin.

And watched as her Mom and Brother fucked on tv,and instead of wanting to be part of the incest love-fest Marilyn was no where to be seen.I guess Marilyn is just cold dead fish stripper that can't give into a family threesome.I really wish she had since it was Marilyn who set this all up,oh well Marilyn doesn't know what she's missing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Might not be believable

But it was fun

WargamerWargamerover 3 years ago

What a stupid story

1/5

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
5 stars

Looking forward to part 2! I hope there are more parts after that also and that they are longer!

ranec1ranec1over 3 years ago
Mean As!!

Chur m8 awsum story

⭐⭐⭐⭐

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice. Chapter 2 please.

Start out with mother and son finding out its even better now that they know. Sister should give in to her attraction and participate - mom and sis in 69 and son in mom, pulling out occasionally for sis to suck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Who was the girl who laughed? She seriously needs to get fucked up by Marilyn and her Mom.....

I would like John, Marily and Stacy to gangbang that girl and show the video to the rest of the women from the party.

sirgrunt99sirgrunt99about 3 years ago
WOW

I hope this is not the end ?

Diecast1Diecast1about 3 years ago

good story, part 2 please

AA++

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Utterly ridiculous premise.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

when the mother said she would be at the party i knew what would happen, even so it was a beautiful story

Remember Last NightRemember Last Nightover 1 year ago

Part two is called for. The sister and mother need more from John and each other.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I think you left out the part about him finding out that he was on the big screen. I would have been a bit angry at my sister for not telling me that was going to happen. Maybe he was just such a nice brother that anything she did to him was ok. And she was the kind of person that always escaped the consequence. Kind of ruined the story for me.

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[10.12.22]

Mucho Caliente!

11/10!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Grandpa twice.!! Mom mistakenly has sex with male stripper who is her son twice!! Sometimes even the same dialogue,

rbloch66rbloch666 months ago

That was actually pretty sweet.

ToughSailorToughSailor4 months ago

Damn! Now that was fun . . . .

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