All Comments on 'Doris'

However, you have managed to exceed even my wildest imagination!

Enjoyed reading this,it is certainley different from any other of the Halloween stories on this site.

Nice story, very different from most on here. The parent twist was interesting, and the wife's sudden desire to celebrate finding out they were half-siblings was unexpected. Good luck in the contest.

Must be British humor?

Britain seems to be full of feeble-minded and perverted shitheads. As is this "writer" ! Sickening !

Thank you.

Very well written, enjoyed it immensely. Don't think anon could understand it.

Chilley

Aren't you able to recognize a beautiful and well written story when it's laid out in front of you? When I was young, trusting and naive, I used to expect the best from people and the dumb, treacherous fucks almost always let me down so I finally learned to expect the worst from them and, guess what, if someone surprises me by NOT letting me down, it's a truly pleasant one.

THIS IS A FIVE STAR STORY. FUCK ALL YOU MISERABLE MOANERS, WHINERS AND FAULT FINDING ASSWIPES.

That was a heart wrenching story. Even though I worked out the secret about half way through I still enjoyed it.