All Comments on 'Dorm Move In'

by Collegeslut1995

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jsmangisjsmangisover 5 years ago
Excellent First Story

This was an enjoyable introduction to what could be a very sexy romp.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wow that was bad

Horribly written bleh

Taurus03Taurus03over 5 years ago
Good start.

Slow down and build the readers anticipation.

Make us the reader feel the build up.

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