All Comments on 'Dormant to Daring'

by RedSkySunset

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
no fair

Not only does the hero of the story not finish, but the true finish is left undone.

SeniorcitizenSeniorcitizenover 17 years ago
Nice story

Very nice credible story. The characters could do with some more fleshing out. Well worth a second chapter. Please be careful with your spelling.

janiexxjaniexxover 17 years ago
Your submission...

...has been mentioned in the New Story Review thread in the Author's Hangout.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
a little comment

good story. a little too much conversation great action and good story line.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
A sweet little story.

Thanks, Janiexx. Your review was spot on!

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