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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Wow!

A smart, exciting, captivating story. Very well done. It's only a low fantasy---titillation, air brushed boobs, and story-book magic---but it certainly delivers. Good job.

lastman416lastman416almost 4 years ago
Welcome back

I can tell you put effort into making this story a *story* rather than just a reason to write about sex. This was well written. It seems like you’re planning multiple chapters, so I look forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Poor bastard, hoisted on his own petard.

GeoD

sm0k3alarmsm0k3alarmover 1 year ago

Liked the world building and the way in which the tables get turned on the main character. Enjoyed it and would welcome more stories in this universe.

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Most people call me Rev, you can too. But you don't, like, HAVE to. I write short stories and longer works, of a darkly erotic fantasy nature. Sometimes I do other weird stuff too. New fiction coming soon. Tip jar: paypal.me/ecrevelle ebooks: https://www.amazon.com/EC-Revel...