by davion2308
Everyone knows a "Gary". It's about time something good happened to him. I chuckled all the way through, the imagery was good, I could picture a friend of mine. Author did a good job of injecting humor into an erotic story.
A good, probable plot. Thanks for a good, funny read.
You should have a repeat performance. Maybe the fat guy taking the lead.
i like this one, i keep coming back once a year for this story. maybe you should expand on this story.
I liked it because the erotic basis is intelligently written, and, supported by good dialogue, and smooth flow.
Thank you for a good story.