All Comments on 'DotCom Ch. 02'

This started out so well that I stopped and found part 1, and read it first. So, I am commenting on both chapters. If I am understanding the story line, the beautiful couple depicted here have yet to have intercourse, satisfying themselves with mutual masturbation. Am I wrong? Should I read it again?

It wasn't the worst version of 'chick falls for the photographer', it was one of the best, IMO. I like the details - 'rounding the corner with bags of groceries' which bring life to the story, and the stories do have a plot.

Keep going with this.