All Comments on 'Double Act'

More from these two PLEASE. Maybe even bring their mom into it??

Maybe bring Tim back, maybe he wasnt really killed....

This is a very original story with a fresh feel and unique presentation. Keep up the good work.

Thanks for writing this hot story love the strap-on part

I've now read both of your stories, terrific work. You're off to a great start for your first postings on LIT! You've got a fan in me so far!

A truly beautiful and erotic story. Very believable and full of emotion.

This is my ultimate fantasy. And this story was not only incredibly hot, it was very well written. The death of Tim halfway through was kind of a shock, but you made it fit the narrative well, plus it served as good, believable motivation for the twincest. Favorited and fived!

Enjoyed the fantasy very much.

First...this could have been greatly improved with some editing-there were enough errors it was very distracting

Loved that you gave Beth a bush but no mention about Cass. Nice long rimming but for me that follows getting her off chowing down..just like my dick ...once it been in her ass no more pussy until thoroughly cleaned, or I was wearing a rubber...safe sex important...for someone who said she's spent night w/other gf's Cass seemed unsure what to do ,still quite the lesbian virgin...