by RejectReality
That was an incredibly sexy story! I loved every minute it took to read it! I can tell you are a talented storyteller. You thought of everything. Please keep writing, I loved it!!
i read this story 5 months ago and i still remember it and its hard to stop thinking about.
I love your stories. I check your page every time I visit this site to see if you have anything new!
I read this story, and all I can say is that I have told my wife about it and she wants to read it too! I have often found myself thinking about it too when life takes a break around me! You've done a very good job. When I read a story, it has to "make a movie" in my imagination, and everything in this story attributed to that for me. Thank you! One little detail I found interesting was when Vanille realized her bush had grown out, you left it to the readers preference in the sex scene to if she'd dealt with it or not. I like that kinda stuff. . . Again, good job!
It's not very often I completely read a story, usually I just skip to the action, but this is so well written and engaging that I read every word. It's also rare for me to favourite an author and you are one of a chosen few to be deemed worthy.
What an awesome story. Just the right amount of intro and build-up and once the sex started... phew, nice work man. i felt like I was there. Stiffening stuff ;)