All Comments on 'Double Helix Ch. 09'

As usual, but... :(

Publish this. Srsly. I've bought paperbacks that weren't half this good.

This is a damn good story man! DAMN GOOD. Can hardly wait for the next one to arive.

I never comment on this site, despite reading more than 1000 entries over the last few years. I have to say this story is one of the very best I have had the pleasure to read in all that time. The plot is well thought out and supported and the sex it realistically relayed. I cant wait for the next chapter.

There are only a few authors I track on Lit, and Fel is easily the best writer. Sex scenes are spectacular, but secondary or incidental to the actual story, as they should be. Keep it up! Can't wait for more. Hate the wait but know it comes before the reward.

The last couple chapters have been pretty bad. Two chapters of Norm being a bitch....