All Comments on 'Double Helix Ch. 21'

Just found Double Helix last week, good reading.

Glad you have Nissi, Tilly and Norm together.

Saw that you started this back in 13, looking forward to seeing more

Thanks

I just finished reading this series straight through and I'm enjoying it a lot. I eagerly look forward to the next chapter.

Simply fantastic story. I cannot find a single flaw. Man it's gonna suck waiting for an update after binging it all, but I cannot wait for more. Glad the love triangle was sorted as well.

I’m bedridden, so I have a lot of time to read, and this is the most realistic sci-fi story I have read in a long time as far as relationships go. All characters have their flaws and nobility, which makes them immensely relatable to me. The characters do not forget slights overnight and just move on with their lives without emotional baggage that they have to slowly work through. Due to bingeing the whole series in a few days, I do not remember what chapter a character stated that emotions underlie thought, but I firmly believe that to be true, and I have enjoyed seeing that relayed throughout this tale. I am looking forward greatly to reading the next chapter. Truly a great read.

This is a great story. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

I just spent the better part of a week reading a story that the author never bothered to finish. That's hours of my life that I will never get back. Thanks FelHarper and thanks Literotica!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Think this author must be history. Story is too good not to continue.

I hope you come back and finish this one day. I really enjoyed reading it.

Great story! I hope some day he will continue it!

I just came across this story two days ago and pulled an all nighter reading it. Hopefully you'll be able to continue writing it but if not, rest assured that the place you left it at is also a good stopping/jumping off point.

Don't be too hard on yourself reading those negative comments. I think most of us understand that life is complicated and that many things come before writing erotica for free.

Just know that I've followed you here and would love to someday see you show up in my feed.

Great story , I also found this story 2 days back and was in it like a leech !

An epic , please publish it . It is a great story . Thanks for sharing .

Very good...a bit of everything. Enjoyed it a lot!. Please keep going.

Found this story a day ago, just finished it. Great story, got hooked on the characters, amazing work.

There are many loose ends to tie up here. This is a seductive tale that sucked me into binge reading. Great characters and a complexity to the universe they inhabit. I hope to see a completion of this story.

After a long absence, I'm ready to write again, and will continue this story. I can't yet promise when I'll release the next chapter, but I'm shooting for the beginning of February.

This is really good storytelling and I can't wait for you to continue. I'm going to "follow" you so I'm notified as soon as the next increment is released. Thank you for all the hours and hard work you've invested into this novel.

Shouldn’t be too much longer. I might end up breaking the next chapter, told from Gena/Sharon’s perspective, into two chapters. It’s running quite long.

Chapter 22 has been submitted, and it’s a long one. It usually takes about 3-7 days to get published here. Chapter 23 will again be from Gena’s perspective.

I will probably write Lamia chapter 4 next. At my current rate, we should see that in March.

Thanks for all the comments, encouragement and suggestions. They keep me motivated.